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不得不看!17年6月四级写作真题解析!-大学英语四六级考试平台-学为贵
来自 : www.guixue.com/article/42...sh 发布时间:2021-03-26

今天学为贵的四六级名师辛晶老师为我们精心整理了2017年四级写作的真题解析,内容非常详尽,备考12月考试的四六级小伙伴可以仔细地学习一下,相信会对你下半年备考四级写作很有帮助的。

【四1】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a bicycle you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【范文】

Advertisement(A Second-hand Bicycle for Sale)

A used Forever mountain bike is (available) on sale! Though used, it’s still a fast and reliable classic bike, for it is well maintained and in good condition (which is) perfect for any standard of riders (beginner right through to competitive club cyclists) with suitable seat and strong tires.

The bike was bought two years ago for 688 yuan, and it is now sold at only 388 yuan (so it is a real bargain! Besides, the price is negotiable)!

I want this bike to be sold as quickly as possible, for I am a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus in the near future. Please feel free to contact me if you are interested in this bike. I can be reached at phone 87654321 or by my e-mail 123@abc.com.

[解析]:

这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售自行车的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“销售二手自行车”因此只需要将题干规定的要点(自行车品牌,性能,状况,价格,出售者的联系方式)有序的组织起来就可以了。

逻辑框架分析:

【分解练习】

段落

句子

内 容

逻辑框架模板


第一段

开题

第1句

一辆二手山地自行车出售。

开篇点名广告主题出售品牌二手自行车。


第2句

虽然是二手的但是保养得好,性能好,仍然是一辆快速值得信赖的自行车,自行车舒适的座驾和结实的轮胎适合任何骑行者。

描述题干内容自行车性能。




第二段

第3句

自行车是两年前买的,原价688元,现388出售,绝对的物美价廉,价格可以商讨。

交代自行车的出售价格。






第三段

第4句

我想尽快出售这辆自行车,因为我是大四学生,不久的将来就要毕业离开校园。

可加入题干以外的自由句,为了引起下句


第5,6句

如果你对自行车感兴趣的话,请随时联系我,我的联系方式是:87654321 或者邮箱:e-mail 123@abc.com

点名题干要求的联系方式。





【四2】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell some of the course books you used at college. Your advertisement may include a brief description of their content, their condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【范文】

Advertisement(English Course Book- on Sale)

I’m Li Hua, a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus, so I have three used course books about English learning to sell at a fairly low price!

These books could be beneficial to anyone who decides to buy them. First, the books provide many practical skills on the following three aspects of English learning: how to improve listening, speaking and writing. Second, the books are still well-maintained with seemingly brand new covers but it is of great use of my CET4. Third, considering being used once, there are some necessary notes on the margin. Therefore they are not charged high, only 10 yuan for each book and each book contains a delicate bookmark with the writer’s signature as a souvenir!

If you are interested in my book, please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions. I can be reached at phone 87654321. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

[解析]:

这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售大学期间用过的教材的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“出售二手教材”因此只需要将题干规定的要点(教材的内容,状况,价格,出售者的联系方式)有序的组织起来就可以了。

逻辑框架分析:

【分解练习】

段落

句子

内 容

逻辑框架模板

第一段

开题

第1句

我是李华,一名大四的学生,由于即将毕业,所以有三本用过的英语学习参考书,低价出售。

开篇点名广告主题出售用过参考书-三本英语参考书。


第二段

第2句

任何购买这三本书的人都会从中受益。

介绍书籍优点

第3句

首先,书中包括了有关英语学习的使用知识,有关如何提高听力、口语、写作。

优点有三。其一,实用性强。

第4句

其次,书保存完好,封面还是崭新的,但是对我英语四级考试有很大帮助。

考试有帮助


第5,6,句

第三,考虑到书不是新的,页边有一些笔记,所以低价出售每本10元并附有书作者签名的精美书签作为纪念品。

低价出售附有书签纪念品。以激发同学们的购买欲。


第三段

第 7.8句

如果对书感兴趣的话可以随时联系我咨询跟多问题,电话:87654321,并期待你的来电。

结尾发挥广告的鼓动作用,留下联系方式。

【四3】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【范文】

Advertisement(A Well-maintain Computer on Sale)

As I am about to graduate and leave the campus, I am going to sell my personal computer at a low price.

It is a Lenovo ThinkPad that I bought in June, 2015. It is not big, but very functional. It has a four-core CPU, an independent display card of 2G, a hard disk of 500G and a screen of 15.6 inches. For the last two years, the laptop has served as my faithful aid and helped me finish most of my assignments and my thesis. There has appeared no fault in the process. I owe so much to it. But as my workplace has already offered me a more advanced working laptop, I find there is no necessity for me to have two. And I know that there must be some of my schoolmates who are more in need of the ThinkPad. Therefore, I determined to sell it.

I bought the laptop as the price of 4500 RMB. Now I will sell it at 1500 yuan or less. Anyone interested can contact me via email, and my mailbox is ***@126.com.

[解析]:

这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售电脑的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“销售二手电脑”因此只需要将题干规定的要点(电脑整体情况、品牌、基本配置软硬件的运行情况,联系方式等)有序的组织起来就可以了。

逻辑框架分析:

【分解练习】

段落

句子

内 容

逻辑框架模板

第一段

开题

第1句

由于我即将毕业离开校园,故低价出售本人电脑。

开篇点名广告主题出售二手电脑。


第二段

第2句

于2015年6月购入的联想电脑

点名题干中要求的电脑品牌。

第3句

电脑尺寸不大,但是功能性很好。

点名电脑外观性能。

第4句

四核CPU,2G 独立显卡,500G 硬盘,15.6英寸显示屏。

具体指出电脑配置


第5,6,7句

在过去的两年里,这部电脑作为我忠实的得利助手帮我完成了大部分的学习任务和学术论文。期间没有出过任何问题,我的成绩大部分归功于我的电脑。

电脑好处多性能好。以激发同学们的购买欲。

第8..9句

由于我工作单位提供电脑,而我并不需要两台电脑,我想一定有学弟学妹们更需要这部联想电脑,所以决定出售。

指明出售原因。


第三段

第 10,11句

我买这部电脑的原价是4500元人民币,现价1500元人民币出售,有感兴趣的同学可以联系我,邮箱是***@126.com.

结尾告知价格和联系方式。

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